Wednesday, 18 March 2015

On Finishing Up Writing Down the Bones

I've been reading the last chunk of pages in this book and I've had some thoughts on the book as a whole.

First, it's been very helpful. I feel that I am actually very motivated by this book. The author is kind of demanding in some parts and I find that when writing, and in life in general, I need that aggressive voice to get me started. Goldberg also gives a lot of great instructions about writing. Not only getting into the habit of writing but also improving your writing. I think my writing has benefited from the time I've spent with this book.

Second, she really stresses the importance of where you write. She mentions in several chapters that she likes to write in cafes, and in fact more than one chapter is solely about writing in cafes or restaurants. That's what she prefers, but she says that finding a place that you like to write will improve your writing, and your relationship with it. I think this is some her best advice. I think that sometimes it really is all about the atmosphere and the environment, and the way they make you feel. Being in a place that you feel comfortable will make everything seem easier and more enjoyable.

Lastly, I've found that much of her advice is not only applicable to writing but also to art, and life:

  • Pay attention to details.
  • Don't get lazy.
  • Go with your first thoughts.
  • Don't be afraid of raw or uncomfortable topics.
  • Look for beauty in everyday things/actions.
  • Don't think about it too seriously.
  • Indulge in your obsessions.
  • Give attention to your subconscious dreams.
  • Don't be chained down by strict logic.
  • Don't be afraid.
  • Be specific.
  • Push yourself.
  • Don't give up.
  • Be yourself.
  • Be patient.
All in all, I'm very glad to have read this book. It's challenged me to think about writing more complexly, and I will not forget its valuable advice.


Thursday, 12 March 2015

On Night Women by Danticat

On Tuesday we spent the majority of class talking about the story Night Women, and I felt that the story has a lot of depth and deserved the time we gave it. I think the story is very much about this woman's internal conflict. Her position in society and her relationship with her son prevent her from living openly. Her feelings about her sex life and her feelings about her son are causing her to fret over her decisions when raising him, I think.

 I also think that, not only is this topic relevant in Haiti where extreme poverty may force some women into prostitution, but it is also relevant in many other countries. Especially the United States where prostitution is pretty common and sex workers are shamed relentlessly by society. It really made me think about the roles of society, and how they have, it seems, almost an even tighter grasp on people in impoverished areas. That must make living and surviving much harder..

Today we are to talk about the Shange story which I have read and find very difficult to dissect. I'm curious to see what other people think about it, because I found it a little confusing. It seems like Indigo is a headstrong little girl living in the south trying to teach herself to learn the fiddle. She seems to not be very well accepted in the neighborhood because of her constant music, but she doesn't seem to care at all. Her fascination with music is evident and becomes her defining characteristic, I think. I'm not sure what the moral of the story could be; it was kind of hard to take it all in after one reading.